This is the last chapter!
Thank you everyone for your kind and encouraging reception.
I might do a post with little tidbits and behind the scene things about the story, what do you guys think?
I'm so glad you've enjoyed Into Thornwood and I'd love to share more stories on the blog sometime.
But, enough of that now :) On to the final chapter!
(Sorry, the indentation is not behaving for me...so, please ignore the strangeness)
(Sorry, the indentation is not behaving for me...so, please ignore the strangeness)
Chapter 12
Now
she will never come back.
Lucian opened the gate, intent on chasing them
down. In his haste, the automaton missed a step and came crashing onto the
stones, breaking apart and clanging all the way down. Furious, Lucian
took his mother’s bible and hurled it through the window. He ran to the opening
and saw the wagon drive away, a glint of copper hair. The broken glass cut into
the palm of his hand. He couldn’t feel it.
She
was your only hope, and you probably killed her.
His lungs filled and a wild scream echoed through
all of Thornwood. Far below the automaton lay scattered over the stairs. The
fall would break his neck…. and death would be instant. That would be nice.
Blood smeared as he ran a hand over his face and then the tears came.
He fell to his knees, staring over the forest,
weeping.
“Cecile?
Come back to us darling.”
The warm coaxing voice was so familiar… but it
wasn’t Dax. Her eyes opened to the face of a memory, with Father’s green eyes
twinkling above her.
“Am
I dead?”
His hearty laugh pulled her into reality, followed
by a bristly kiss. “No my dear. The Lord has seen fit to leave both of us on
earth for a while longer.”
“You’re
alive!” She sat up with that realization. “And you have a beard.”
“Yes
I am and yes I do, it grew during my travels. Do you like it?”
Cecile threw herself into his arms with a delighted
squeal. “Oh, Father I am so glad that we have you back!”
He squeezed her with all the strength she had
missed. Over his shoulder, she smiled at the group gathered around. Caprice
sat next to her on the bed, Dax and Frank stood at the foot of the bed, Mrs.
Harvey and all the little ones peeked through the door. After a moment,
she pulled away to look at her father.
“But
how did you survive? I thought-“
“That
I died in the shipwreck? I thought I would too, but God had everything in his
control. I woke up on a beach amid the wreckage and a few of the crew. It was a
long journey home, but I was thanking the Lord the entire way. Enough of me- I
heard that you have had an adventure while I was gone. I would have gone with
the rescue party-“
Caprice laid her hand on his shoulder and smiled at
Cecile. “But father arrived very late last night and I thought that he should
rest.” Cecile beamed at her sister’s voice.
“Certainly any man can nap
peacefully when his daughter has been kidnaped-” Father grumbled. After breath, his expression
softened and smile beamed from the red beard.
“How
are you feeling?” He reached out and gently smoothed the bandage around her
head. “That was a quite a blow you suffered.”
Cecile lay against the pillows, pain returning with
its acknowledgment. “I’ll be fine… “
Blurred thoughts began to focus, and she saw it
again; the arm swinging out, aimed for Dax and the force of the impact. With the
recovered memory she popped up.
“Lucian!”
Their faces skewed in confusion, everyone mouthing
the name. Caprice took Cecile’s hand
gently and asked, “Who is Lucian?”
“He
is the inventor’s son, he’s trapped inside Thornwood-“
Dax broke in. “Cecile, no one lives in Thornwood.
There was a fire-“
“Yes,
I know that. The fire that killed his mother, but he is still alive and I have
to go back-“
“What about
that metal man?” Frank insisted. “It kidnapped you, and we saw it hurt you.
That thing is dangerous.”
“No
it’s not, that was Lucian-”
“How
hard were you hit? You know that’s impossible Cecile.”
“Please
believe me, Frank, I know it’s sounds fantastic, but it is true. Lucian is a
real person. He controls the automaton-“
Frank punched the bedcovers with a fierce
expression. “So he is the one who did all this.” He gestured to Cecile, all her
scratches and cuts bandaged. “And you want to go back to him?”
She tried to find the words that would make them
understand.
“He
has nothing, he is hopeless, and he is so desperately lost. I think God
arranged for us to meet Lucian and, however strange and frightening the means
were, we have. Now that we know about this poor soul, we cannot just leave him
to die.”
Frank’s clenched jaw made her continue.
“Yes, he kidnapped me. But he did not give me the
scratches on my arms, nor did he make me fall. The only time he was violent was
when you threatened him, and even then he did not aim his strike for me. I tell
you, he is not a cruel man and he won’t harm us when we return.”
As they returned to Thornwood, Caprice opened her heart
to her sister.
“Cecile, I am so sorry for the way I’ve treated you
all these years.” The sincerity in Caprice eyes was beautiful.
“I was such a
wretched person, wasn't it? But after father’s
shipwreck, everything I held onto just slipped through my fingers. Despite everything you and Dax
had hope. You trusted in the Lord; you’ll never know what a testimony that was to me. But I
was stubborn and proud, and didn’t want to surrender. Then when you and Dax
disappeared, I was distraught. God took away everything I cared about-
and He showed me how brief this life is.”
Caprice wiped the tears that flowed
down her cheeks, and laughed. “ I was washing dishes and began to cry, feeling
the weight of my sin and the hopelessness of my life. I knelt down right there,
the way mother prayed with us at bedtime, and I gave my heart to the Lord.”
Cecile was crying too, and she hugged her sister;
overjoyed with the knowledge that she now was her sister in Christ. The wagon bounced
over a rock, throwing the passengers off balance. Father caught both of his
girls in an embrace and kissed them. Caprice shone with happiness.
“That night, God brought Father home. I probably woke entire neighborhood when the door opened and he was standing there-”
“Sorry to interrupt…” Frank called back. “But look
ahead.”
They looked, and through the thinning trees they
saw the iron gate opened wide. Frank urged on the horses and they road through,
stopping at the steps.
A breath caught in Cecile’s throat, for there was
the automaton.
Bits of metal and shards of glass lay scattered
over the stones like confetti. The dented limbs and torso had rolled to the
base of the stairs, and by the wagon wheel was the automaton’s battered head,
each glass portal smashed.
“Well, I would have loved to see that beast fall.”
Frank jumped from the wagon and kicked the body. “It won’t be able hurt anyone
again.”
Father climbed down and helped Cecile and Caprice
out of the back. Dax limped to the front and they surveyed the wreckage.
Despite how scared Cecile once was of the automaton, she was sad to see it
destroyed.
“Cecile?” Caprice picked up something among the
broken pieces. “Here, look at this.”
She held out a key in the palm of her hand. Cecile
snatched instantly and examined it in the sunlight, thinking it may vanish away.
“You found it!” She squeaked. “Come with me, we are
going to rescue my kidnaper!”
She lifted the edge of her skirt and started up
the stairs. Through the house she sprinted, up to the top story. Caprice was
close behind and together they halted, breathless, at the bookcase.
“Lucian! Caprice found a key, it was inside the
automaton.”
Cecile thrust it into the keyhole. It turned with a click. A little
knob stuck out from the wood and with a trembling hand, she took hold of it and
pulled. The shelf was heavy, and with
years of resting it wouldn’t move. Caprice joined her; they braced their feet
and heaved at the door.
“It’s
coming! It’s starting to open!” Cecile could't contain her excitement as a
crack of light widened between the shelves. Then something
yanked the door shut with a slam, sending them back with a surprised cry.
“What was that?” Caprice looked to Cecile, but
before she could answer father came up the stairs, Dax’s arm around his
shoulders. “Is everything all right, girls? I can’t wait to meet this poor
soul.”
Cecile pulled out the key and peered through the
hole, it was blocked. “He’s in there, but we can’t open the door… Lucian? That
is you, isn’t it? Why won’t you let us in?”
“You
found the key, and I thank you. Now you can go home.” His monotone voice was
perplexing.
“I was home, and I came back for you. Do you truly
think we’ll leave you now, just like that? I deserve to at least see the face
of my kidnaper.”
“No, you don’t”
“Are
you going to hide in your room until we leave?”
“I believe that's a marvelous idea.”
Cecile groaned and threw her hands in the air.
Frank
shifted from his position by the banister. “Right
then, we did what we could, time to head on home. I need to find Diamond and
bring the other wagon back to the shop.”
“Wait! Please,
we can’t leave yet-“ Cecile pleaded.
“You
heard him, he doesn’t want us here." Realizing his tone, Frank tried again.
"You did the right thing, Cecile, but now
it’s done. Let’s go on home.” With a glance over his shoulder, Frank turned and started back down the stairs.
As she looked back to her family, her mind could only offer one thought; this
isn’t how it should go.
“Please Father," Cecile tried to keep her voice calm. "We can’t leave him like this.”
He
stepped close and put a hand on her shoulder. “What else can we do? You have
shown him love, you helped set him free- what happens next is his choice, it’s
in the Lord’s hands.”
She
looked up from the floor and nodded slowly. “ I suppose you are right…”
Dax limped forward and gave her a smile. “ He
cannot hide forever, and you know him better then I do, but I have a feeling
you will meet him again someday.”
Father helped Dax to the stairs while Cecile stood
by the bookshelf a few moments more.
“Would you like me to stay?” Caprice asked.
“Thank you, Caprice, but no… I’d like to say
goodbye.”
Cecile approached the bookcase, swallowed hard, and prayed that he was listening.
“Lucian, I'm going home now, just like you want. I hoped things would end differently…” Her restraint broke with an
exasperated little cry.
“Oh
why won’t you open the door? What are you afraid of?”
One
word came through, very close and quietly.
“You.” His reply struck her like an arrow.
“Why
are you afraid of me?”
“Because
I am a monster. If you come in, you will take one look at me and turn away with
disgust. I would rather remember the girl who smiled at me from the garden and
never see you again, then have your repulsed expression burned in my
mind.”
Cecile
rested her forehead against the bookshelf and heaved a sigh.
“Oh,
Lucian, do you think so little of me? No matter what happened to you in the
fire, that is not what makes a monster. Man sees the outward appearance, but
God sees the heart… and with His help I will try to as well.”
She
waited, but was only answered with silence.
“Lucian?"
“Are
you coming, Cecile?” Caprice’s voice carried from below.
“Yes,
Caprice.” She called. Then, to him she spoke softly.
“Goodbye Lucian.”
Cecile
wiped tears away as she left Thornwood. The golden sun fell warm upon her face,
slanting through the leafy branches. She took her father’s hand and climbed
into the wagon. Frank road ahead on Diamond and Dax prodded the horses to a
trot.
She felt numb. The mansion somehow stared back at her through the empty windows. A
gentle breeze played in the rose vines and carried the fragrance along as they drove through the gate. Tearing her gaze away, Cecile looked ahead to the forest
path and Caprice pressed a handkerchief into her hand.
“Wait!”
The shout sent a jolt through Cecile's body. She whirled around and there
he was, running after them. Dax pulled the wagon to a stop and she leapt to the ground.
They met under the iron arch.
Lucian stood a head taller then her, a black mop of
hair falling over his face. Cecile reached up and swept the hair from his bloodshot
blues eyes. The side of his pale face was marked with ghastly scars, but she
could still see a strong resemblance to the handsome Mr. Eilert.
Without a
word, Lucian snapped a blossom from the wall and ran his metal hand down the
stem. He held out to her a thornless
rose.
“Cecile.
I’m afraid, I cannot let you go.”
The flower quavered in his grip and he looked at her searchingly. Cecile reached out and took the gift. Her heart fluttered behind her ribcage as she offered her bandaged hand with a shy smile.
“Then
you will have to come with us, won’t you?”
I love it!
ReplyDeleteBravo! What a nice ending! What a surprise that the father survived, too. Great job! I really enjoyed Into Thornwood, and would love to read some behind the scenes stuff.
ReplyDeleteLOVE it!!!!!!!!! You did a really good job!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteOops, forgot to comment! I read this late at night then right after finishing my phone went dead.
ReplyDeleteIt was fantastic!!!!! The ending was great. I was like "Wait! No, it can't end like this... YES!!!!!"
Wow, Becca, this is awesome!! You did such a great job on this rewriting of a classic fairytale!! I love how interesting and original it is!!
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